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    Inactive Member rose's Avatar
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    come touch and see
    what you've been missing of me
    take the fire to your hands
    use them to demand
    show me your desperation
    all those times; added frustration
    lead me recklessly
    turn the sun into night.
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    for some reason, this piece really caught me....it seemed like a song or summin...I pictured you (since I know you) playing a guitar to this...some slow massive heartache riff....i dug it..plain and simple....

    i really like the last line...something that happens everyday, but put in such good words...

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    I really liked this one.

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    [This message has been edited by Branflakes (edited August 23, 2001).]

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